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The Ring Odell Harper Made in 1968 (Part 2 Ending)

Kayla stared at him across the glass counter.

Odell took the paper envelope out of his shirt pocket. He laid it on the counter between them, and he took off his glasses and set them down beside it, because he did not want to see her face too clearly for the next part.

"My name is Odell Harper," he said. "O.H. I made this ring in 1968, and I gave it to your grandmother on the church steps down the road. I got hurt over there, and I was a long time in the hospital. But I came home."

Kayla put both hands over her mouth.

"I don't understand," she said through her fingers. "She said..."

"I know what she said." He slid the envelope toward her. "I'm going to ask you to take this to her. No charge. Keep your three hundred. Fix your car."

"Mr. Harper, I can't..."

"You can," Odell said. "It was never mine to loan on."

* * *

But before she left, he asked to look at it one more time.

He had been thinking about those small, crooked scratches beside his star for three days. He set the loupe to his eye and turned the band slowly under the counter lamp, the way the German had taught him. A good engraver reads metal the way a farmer reads a sky.

The scratches were not random. They were letters. Tiny, shaky capitals, pushed into the gold with the point of a needle by somebody who did not know how to engrave but had all the patience in the world.

It took him a full minute to read them.

O.H. LIVED. 1970.

Odell set the ring down very gently on the glass. He did not say anything for a long time.

So she had known. Not at first, maybe. But she had known.

"Mr. Harper?" Kayla said. "Are you all right?"

"Ask your grandmother," Odell said, "if she would let an old man visit her on Sunday."

* * *

The nursing home in Albany had a sunroom at the end of the east hall with tall windows and an old upright piano with the lid closed. Ruby Toomer sat by the window in a blue cardigan with her hair done. Kayla had fixed it for her that morning.

Odell came in holding his hat in both hands, the way he had held it on the church steps in 1968.

"Odell," Ruby said.

"Ruby."

He sat down across from her. For a while they just looked at each other. She was seventy-six. He could still see the girl.

"I thought you were dead," she said finally. "For six months, I thought you were dead. A Harper boy from over in the next county was killed that March. My daddy came home from town and said it was you. Your letters stopped. I believed him."

"My hands were burned," Odell said. "I couldn't write."

"I know that now." She looked down at her own hands. "Daddy knew it then. Your letters started coming again in August, from Japan. He burned them in the stove before I ever saw them. He wanted me married to Royce Toomer, and Royce was a good man, and I was grieving, and I said yes in September."

Odell closed his eyes.

"You came home in April of 1970," Ruby said. "I saw you get off the bus in front of your daddy's store. I was standing in the window of the post office, six months along with Royce's baby. That was how I found out." Her voice shook. "I went home and took out your ring and scratched those words in it with a sewing needle. So I'd never forget to be grateful. And then I put it in my Bible and I never wore it again."

"Why didn't you tell me?"

"Because I'd made a promise to Royce. And he kept every promise he ever made me, for fifty-one years." She reached across and laid her hand on top of his. "I'm not sorry I married him, Odell. I'm only sorry you never knew why."

* * *

When he got home that evening, Mitch was sitting on the front bench with the refiner's box beside him.

"Kayla called," Mitch said. "Told me what happened." He looked at the box. "I've been sitting here going through it. There are eleven rings in here with that little star inside them."

Odell sat down next to him.

"I'm not sending those to Macon," Mitch said. "I'll call the families. Some of them might want them back." He rubbed his neck. "We'll find the tax money some other way. Sell the bass boat. You never use it anyway."

"I use it."

"Uncle Odell, you have caught one fish in that boat since 2009."

Odell laughed. It surprised them both.

* * *

Every Sunday afternoon that winter, Odell drove to Albany with a pecan pie from the church bake sale on the seat beside him. He and Ruby sat in the sunroom at the end of the east hall and talked about everything but the war. Kayla brought them coffee and pretended not to listen.

Some Sundays they hardly talked at all. Ruby liked to watch the cardinals at the feeder outside the window, and Odell liked to watch her watch them. The nurses on the east hall started calling him Sunday Harper. He did not mind it one bit.

Ruby wore the ring on her right hand now. In January, she asked him to clean it.

He took it home to his bench at the back of the store and polished it under the lamp. He did not touch the scratches. Then, beside her crooked needle letters, he cut one more star, no bigger than a grain of sand. It was the only ring he ever signed twice.

* * *
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